Friday, 19 April 2013

Cael and Ava's story

One day Cael woke up and decided to have a lemonade stand, but there were no lemons in the house and the store was closed! Where would they get their lemons from? Cael decided to call Ava and ask her to help him find some lemons. So he rang the phone and spoke to Ava.






'Hello Ava' said Cael 'I need help getting some lemons'
'Hello Cael' said Ava 'I would LOVE to help you find some lemons, but first I have to pack my bag!'
'OKAY' said Cael, 'I will pack my bag too!!'

So they both packed their bags. Cael packed his magical ladder, a torch and lots of yummy food like radishes, sandwiches and a big bottle of water. Ava packed her magical keys and her bow and arrow and lots of delicious fruit. Cael remembered he forgot his sword and sheath so he packed those too. SHINKK. 'Wait a minute' said Ava 'We better pack a first aid kit and some warm coats' so they did.




'Where are the lemons Cael?' Ava asked, 'They are in the giants garden' said Cael 'But it's very far away, how will we get there?' 'I KNOW said Ava, we will ride Abby there!' 'Good idea' said Cael. So they climbed on top of Abby together and off they went, clipty clopty clipty clopty.


They rode for a long long time, and then they finally got to the giants garden. The but there was a big wall surrounding the garden and Abby was much too little to jump over it. They both climbed off of Abby and had a wee think. 'Hmm' said Cael,'How will we get over this wall?' 'I know!' said Ava we can use your magical ladder!' 'Good thinking!' said Cael, and he got his magical ladder out. FLOOP! went the ladder and they both climbed out 'Phew,' said Ava, this is a lot of hard work. 'Yeah' said Cael, 'It certainly is' but they finally got to the top of the wall and jumped down into the giants garden 'Shhhhhhh!' said Cael, 'we must be really very very quiet, I think the giant is sleeping' so they tip toed over to the lemon tree. Then a little bird saw them and flew away very fast, it made lots of noise and woke the giant up. 'Oh NO' said Ava 'What are we going to do?????' Cael said 'We must fight the giant Ava' 'Okay Cael' said Ava and she got out her bow and arrows. SCHWIKK! and Cael got out his sword SHINKK! Cael and Ava stood ready and the giant ROARED. 'GRRR WHO IS EATING MY LEMON'S THEY ARE MY SPECIAL LEMONS FOR ME AND I DON'T WANT TO SHARE THEM' Cael and Ava were a little bit scared but then Ava got her arrow and shot it at the giant, THWIP it flew through the air and ZOK it landed in the giants leg. FWING Cael swung his sword at the same time

'OWWWWWWWWWWW' cried the giant and fell down' he was crying and very sad 'MY POOR LEG IS VERY SORE NOW, WHY DID YOU HURT ME???' Cael and Ava felt sad for the giant. So Cael gave the giant a cuddle while Ava fixed up his leg with a sticking plaster. 'OH THANK YOU' said the giant 'I FEEL MUCH BETTER'. After the giant was fixed up they all had a picnic with radishes and fruit and sandwiches and a big drink of water. After that they felt much better.


The giant very kindly gave them a big bag of lemons so they could make some lemonade. Cael and Ava packed them into their bags and used Ava's magic keys to open a secret door in the wall, the giant showed them where. 'Good bye giant' they both said and the giant blew them a very big kiss goodbye too. When they got back to Abby and climbed on with their heavy bags of lemons, Abby sat down and wouldn't move. 'Oh dear' said Ava 'MOVE Abby' but then Cael got some carrots from his bag and fed them to Abby who was very happy, then Ava put a warm jersey on Abby to keep her warm and then she and had enough energy to walk home.



When they got home Cael and Ava mixed lemons and honey and water together and made delicious lemonade. Yum!


3 comments:

  1. That is an awesome story! So good you should print it out and publish it as a children's story book! I wish I could write an awesome story like that!

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  2. Ava said I loved that story, I thought the lemons were going to be giant sized!!

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  3. Edey said - erm, um, ummmmmm, I, Uuummm, I want to say I love reading that

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